February 10, 2010

An arabesque of smoke

Gaily, they chase after the ephemeral mirages that the whispering winds wrought in the smoke of a candle now extinguished.

2 comments:

  1. Your command of the English language is impressive. Better than many native-speakers.

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  2. Wow, high praise coming from you! Thanks, you sweet talker! ;j

    "Better than many native-speakers" - I love how that sentence, in another context, from another person could just as well have been an insult. ; 7

    CEO: "There has been a drop in the quality of your designs- they aren't idiot-proof anymore!"
    Engineer: "No there hasn't! There has just been a drastic increase in the quality of the idiots we're getting these days!"

    I do alright with flashy writing, but as several people have pointed out, it would get tiresome to read at length, and often feels like show-offy obfuscation of meaning. Shrug. It still needs a lot of work, that's for sure. : j

    Writing natural English is skill I don't have... and I suspect is essential to properly conversing with as large an audience.
    It all comes down to who one writes for.
    I write firstly for myself and secondly for the readers, so I let myself play the games that amuse me so.
    Who do you write for?

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